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i think the nebula is good in front, but yea maybe have one in front of the planet and one in back. even things out a bit that way. And yea the astroids ar a little too simple but they definatly look like they are 3-D so that's great! but just work on that a little.
Good job!
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i like it !
But the rest is just great, so much detail everywhere
The asteroids look like they were pasted over the nebula, or something like that. The lighting off them is very wrong. Everone is wrong, except the one nearest the middle. The lighting on the rest is wrong. I'd assume the huge bright light in the middle would cast some glow on them, somehow.
that's the one thing i see wrong with this. i dont see any problems with the nebula being over the planet. that's cool
good work here.
Other than that, man, this is awesome. I think the better your piece is sometimes, the more critical people are going to be, just because your standards are so high.
Wicked piece man....
nice job otherwise though, keep it up.